HAIKU in Response to One Deep Breath Prompt of 1-6-08

glorious the moon
therefore our thanks dark clouds
come to rest our necks

The theme this week at One Deep Breath is the moon. I’ve always loved the above classic Japanese haiku by the wonderful Basho (Haiku Hut/Basho).

Here’s a scifaiku (haiku like form with scifi/fantasy theme) I wrote a long time ago in response to it:

moonless world
unthinking
we crane our necks

You can drop by One Deep Breath (link above) and check out the comments to appreciate the results of others' moon gazing.

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‘til next time, keep dreaming,

Roswila
[aka: Patricia Kelly]
****If you wish to copy or use any of my writing or poems, please email me for permission (under “View my complete profile”)****My other blogs ROSWILA’S TAROT GALLERY & JOURNAL and ROSWILA’S TAIGA TAROT.