AS ABOVE, SO BELOW (photo) & OVERHEAD (dreamku series) by Roswila
OVERHEAD
“No, don’t,” I rush up
and try to stop him from
opening the latch –
I know what’s beyond this small
door in our home’s white ceiling
he’ll over-react
drawing attention to our
vulnerability,
to this openness to attack
or burglary right overhead
and all that stuff stashed
in the corridors beyond
there’ll be such a fuss
just when things have grown peaceful
he had to notice this little door
in the time it takes for him to reach the latch
I’ve thought of a dozen ways to secure it
an exasperated sigh slips out of me, why try
to close the barn door—the horse has escaped
[three tanka capped by a pair of two-liners on a dream of 2-22-13. By the way, the other meaning for “overhead” – related to the expenses of running a business – could also apply here. Especially if one understands “business” as applied to someone’s personal concerns. Photo “As Above, So Below" by Roswila]
For more in-depth exploration:
-- very brief comparison of dreamku and haiku: DREAMKU ARE NOT HAIKU
-- a brief post about both dreamku and my photos THE AREN'TS OF DREAMKU & ACCOMPANYING DIGITAL PHOTOS.
-- detailed three-part post about dreamku: "A DREAMKU PRIMER: Writing Haiku-Like Poems About Your Night Dreams": PART ONE: Introduction & Writing Dreamku as Dream Work; PART TWO: Elements of the Haiku Form Used in Dreamku; and PART THREE: How to Write Dreamku (the second and third parts have some overlap).
-- a short up-dating post about the three-part "A DREAMKU PRIMER" -- Important Up-date to A DREAMKU PRIMER....".
If you wish to copy or use any of my writing or poems, please email me for permission (under “View my complete profile”). Roswila's other blogs: ROSWILA’S TAROT GALLERY & JOURNAL; ROSWILA’S TAIGA TAROT; and TRYING TO HOLD A BOX OF LIGHT.