DREAMKU: Response to One Deep Breath Prompt of 4/30/07
the whirling seal
from beneath the frozen sea
joy or insanity
The above is what I am now terming a "dreamku." I.e., a haiku-inspired form about night dreams. This is a very old dream that I wrote a lengthy poem about years ago and just recently tried revising, to no good result. When I saw today's One Deep Breath prompt to create something on a "sea" theme I immedately saw the seal in the sea of this old dream.
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‘til next time, keep dreaming,
Roswila
[aka: Patricia Kelly]
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Labels: dream haiku, dreamku, One Deep Breath
posted by Roswila @ 12:30 PM
6 Comments:
I remember seeing a seal pop its head up out of the water when we were traveling the Gaspe Peninisula... and this was late in the year! I think he was having lots of fun, though- they seem to do that a lot...
Seals always seem to be smiling, so I would opt for joy. Nice image.
I'm liking these positive takes on the seal's aspect in this old dream. Thanks! :-)
I love the image of the whirling seal. Smiling of course!
i liked the seal's little cameo - i've never seen a seal in the sea (nor in a dream, for that matter!) so i'm not sure i can comment on its aspect, but i enjoyed the 'dreamku'!
It would be insanity for us, but natural for them. I see I am not the only one trying to figure out dreams of strange things and places.
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