HAIKU: Response to One Deep Breath's Prompt of 12/18/06
Photo: Tundra Lake, Manitoba, Canada, WebShots.com
frigid rain ends
sudden sunlight crosses
the empty page
frigid rain ends
sudden sunlight crosses
the empty page
This week's prompt at One Deep Breath is about winter storms. I filled that page with writing rather rapidly after this experience. :-) I enourage you to visit the site to read the full prompt and enjoy others' responses.
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‘til next time, keep dreaming,
Roswila
[aka: Patricia Kelly]
****If you wish to copy or use any of my writing or poems, please email me for permission (under “View my complete profile”)****My other blog: ROSWILA’S TAROT GALLERY & JOURNAL.
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posted by Roswila @ 7:47 AM
9 Comments:
Lovely haiku, nice to chosse just after the storm as your focus. Beautiful photo too.
Love the image of the "empty page"
I love when the sunlight fills the page. Lovely!
Lovely poem, with all its extremes.
I like that empty page after the rain.. the contrast of light with the way raindrops can be like print... Good images!
Oh, a perfect description of writer's block ending! Did I get it?
Yes, in the literal experience of the ku, definitely. And as with many ku once I wrote it and "sat" with it, I saw it carrying a wider "meaning," in this case, talking to a renewal of spirit in general.
Happy Holidays to All, speaking of renewal!
Beautiful metaphor ... JP
I like this one, too... especially since I have severl "stormy" projects on my pages right now and would love to see some sunlight :)
mpm
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