HAIKU (In Reponse to One Deep Breath's 11/20/06 Prompt)
a cup of soup
the blush of sunset
through the curtains
the blush of sunset
through the curtains
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This is in response to One Deep Breath's November 20, 2006 prompt for a haiku referencing one or more of our senses. (I.e., show not tell.) You can visit the site to read the complete prompt with resources, and others' responses. BTW, the above Japanese ideogram means "autumn."
‘til next time, keep dreaming,
Roswila
[aka: Patricia Kelly]
****If you wish to copy or use any of my writing or poems, please email me for permission (under “View my complete profile”)****My other blog: ROSWILA’S TAROT GALLERY & JOURNAL.
posted by Roswila @ 9:12 AM
9 Comments:
Very evocative! Thanks for visiting my site and commenting on my haiku! Appreciate the input! -llm.
That's a lovely haiku and a lovely image.
Lovely poem and Japanese ideogram.
I can appreciate this scene! Lovely poem.
A calming picture of the end of one's day.
It's very nice at this end of a long day to see these comments. :-)
Thanks to you all.
Nice rhythm and word choice. Sounds like a restful scene.
I really like this one. I am there.
ooooh. I love this one. Very nice.
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