THE BIG BANG (photo) & A LIFE IN BRIEF (various old dreamku) by Roswila
Preamble
dream proclamation:
the cosmos won’t provide content,
only structure
Story
saw dust and large mice
in the underwear drawer
inheritance
demanding to be fed shadow mouth
black shadows flap
out of office windows
invasion or escape
the only way out
will muddy her white coat
she hesitates
the path one wishes for
is just as hard –
walking one’s talk
anger and love
feel the same in her body
the heart’s choice
the point of her life:
to communicate for them,
not to be happy
[a series of old dreamku and one old monoku, dates dreamed/written ranging from prior to 2004 (i.e. so old as to be undated) through 2008. I came across these when going through old blog posts, and paper and computer files to be sure I have complete, accurate records. I’ve organized them in a vaguely meaningful order, not by date dreamed/written. Some have appeared here many years ago, and some have not. Some are not truly dreamku but more like aphorisms; however, all are from my dreams. Photo "The Big Bang" by Roswila; which is what I have going on in my head today, am even concerned it might "go migraine." Maybe it's due to that huge solar flare this morning.]
Also, the photo accompanying a daily dream poem or non-dream based poem is not necessarily meant to illustrate it, but to reflect some small, even slant aspect of the verse -- similar to Japanese haiga (illustrated haiku). I've also recently realized that although the dreamku (i.e. dream based poems) posted here tend not to have metaphor or simile, the accompanying photos almost always act as such.
To write a metaphor or simile into a dream scenario is something I rarely do. It can be confusing: did it really look like a hand, say, in the dream, or am I just being poetic to make my conscious point? As these dreamku act as a dream journal, my over-riding tendency is to try to stay close to the actual dream scenario itself. Admittedly making for a tendency to less "poetic" dreamku. Then why pay attention to any haiku, tanka, or monoku parameters at all when writing about my dreams? Because I find in even attempting to adhere to them I'm making choices that relieve my dream recall of a great deal of chatter so that I can get down to some important dream aspects. Here's a link to THE AREN'TS OF DREAMKU & ACCOMPANYING PHOTOS in which I go into some of the basic parameters for dreamku and the photos chosen to go with them (and with any non-dream based poems I post here, as well).
The archives in the sidebar hold years of the daily dreamku, tanka, monoku and photo posts I've made, grouped in one post by month. As I no longer post dreamku (or non-dream based poems) strictly daily, each post will appear below and then in the archives by the day on which it was posted.
There are many other sorts of posts here, not all dream-based. I indicate which are about or influenced by dreams. Some non-dream focused posts are book reviews, "regular" poems (some by other writers than myself), scifaiku, writing exercises, Tarot haiku, photos, haiga, and so on. However, most of those are in much older posts. There's a listing by month going back to early 2006 in the sidebar.
‘til next time, keep dreaming,
[aka: Patricia Kelly]
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