Roswila's Dream & Poetry Realm

SEE ALSO: TRYING TO HOLD A BOX OF LIGHT (photos, realistic to abstract)

Sunday, March 01, 2015

MELTING (photomorph) & UNKNEADED DOUGH (dream tanka series) by Roswila


the foal keeps running
around the paddock in tight
circles ... backwards!
like all of its workhorse kind
it's inexhaustible

I know, because I've
turned into a clay-like puddle
just racing after
this stubborn little tyro
trying to catch and slow it down

mind you, I mean an
actual puddle, lying
like unkneaded dough --
I recall a children's story
in which this also occurred,

but cannot recall
the fate of the doughy pile,
and there'd been no foal
spiraling backwards everywhere,
still egging it on to rise

[tanka series on a dream of 2-28-15. Another horse I will put this much out there: I've been using a "cross country skiing" exercise machine several times a week for quite some time now. More hoping to develop a bit of supporting muscle for my arthritic joints than to lose weight. And as I do so it does sometimes feel like chasing something in circles. I've also been thinking about my past even more than usual. Referenced I think by "backwards" in the dream. Then, there's that possibly meaningful homophone for "unkneaded" -- unneeded. And, as always, there are other levels that I won't go into here. BTW, I did actually remember that little bit from the mostly forgotten children's story while dreaming. Photomorph "Melting" (2-7-15 008v4) by Roswila]


But first, a request: please let me know of any typos or other sorts of blunders in my posts. As my eyes age I'm finding more mistakes are creeping into what I put up here no matter how many times I proof it all. Thanks for any help!

The dream-based poems posted on this blog -- dreamku, tanka, two-liners, monoku, free verse, dream narratives -- are offered in the spirit of collaboration. I have done my part. Now it’s your turn to jump in and see what comes up for you. I.e., there is no right or wrong way to relate to any of these dream offerings. Even my own understandings of them change over time. And it gives me joy when a reader sees something in any of them that I have not. (This all applies to any of the non-dream poems posted here, too.)

Also please note that a dream poem or narrative is not intended as an interpretation of a dream, or even a complete and accurate rendering of one. It is my attempt to get down dream imagery/action that grabs me and, as I write about it, elicits my conscious written association and response. Nor do I believe that one has to remember dreams in order for them to do their work. In my understanding, we are much more than our conscious selves.

You may also note in any further reading on dreamku (the specific forms of dreamku, tanka, two-liners and monoku) you may do here, that in the beginning I stressed "showing, not telling." However, this has been changing for some time. I now tend to "show" (the dream story) and cap if off with a "tell" (some reaction and/or insight I've had to the dream as I was writing about it). This also pretty much applies to my free verse dream poems as well. As to what I have begun calling dream narratives, they are a different animal, probably most akin to prose poems.

For more in-depth exploration of the dreamku forms specifically and one post in which I also address my photo choices:

-- very brief comparison of dreamku and haiku: DREAMKU ARE NOT HAIKU

-- a brief post about both dreamku and my photos THE AREN'TS OF DREAMKU & ACCOMPANYING DIGITAL PHOTOS.

-- detailed three-part post about dreamku: "A DREAMKU PRIMER: Writing Haiku-Like Poems About Your Night Dreams": PART ONE: Introduction & Writing Dreamku as Dream Work; PART TWO: Elements of the Haiku Form Used in Dreamku; and PART THREE: How to Write Dreamku (the second and third parts have some overlap).

-- a short up-dating post about the three-part "A DREAMKU PRIMER" -- Important Up-date to A DREAMKU PRIMER....".

* * * *
‘til next time, keep dreaming,

If you wish to copy or use any of my writing or poems, please email me for permission (under “View my complete profile”). Roswila's connections & other blogs: Charter Member of the United Haiku and Tanka Society (UHTS); ROSWILA’S TAROT GALLERY & JOURNAL; ROSWILA’S TAIGA TAROT; and TRYING TO HOLD A BOX OF LIGHT.


Post a Comment

Subscribe to Post Comments [Atom]

<< Home