TILT! (photo) & THE WOBBLE (dreamku series) by Roswila
THE WOBBLE
(series of dreams from one night)
he’s alive again,
this young boy I’d helped raise,
and his mother and
I are friends again but this
can only be a dream
then I get the job
I’d applied for, despite my
utter lack of skill
and my new co-worker
swallows an untested cure
determined to live --
they rush to pump her stomach
she’d taken the wrong risk
a voice wryly notes: “Seems there’s always
a wobble at the center of the universe”
[a dream tanka, dreamku, dream tanka, and capping two-liner on a series of dreams of 11-19-12. Those words in quotes at the end are verbatim and were the total content of the last dream I recall from the night’s sleep. Photo “Tilt!” by Roswila]
For more in-depth exploration:
-- a brief post about both dreamku and my photos THE AREN'TS OF DREAMKU & ACCOMPANYING DIGITAL PHOTOS.
-- detailed three-part post about dreamku: "A DREAMKU PRIMER: Writing Haiku-Like Poems About Your Night Dreams": PART ONE: Introduction & Writing Dreamku as Dream Work; PART TWO: Elements of the Haiku Form Used in Dreamku; and PART THREE: How to Write Dreamku (the second and third parts have some overlap).
-- a brief up-dating post about the three-part "A DREAMKU PRIMER" -- Important Up-date to A DREAMKU PRIMER....".
If you wish to copy or use any of my writing or poems, please email me for permission (under “View my complete profile”). Roswila's other blogs: ROSWILA’S TAROT GALLERY & JOURNAL; ROSWILA’S TAIGA TAROT; and TRYING TO HOLD A BOX OF LIGHT.
2 Comments:
I love this photo and the poem. It amazes me how you pull the lines and images of the dream poem together with a closing line.
Thanks, Sajuno. Glad you stopped by. It's odd to say but I feel as if I didn't write that closing line since it was from the last dream of the night, verbatim. Isn't that silly? But I will comfortably take credit for recognizing that the line links all of the night's previous dreams together.
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