IN THE BEGINNING (photomorph) & THE STORY LINE (dream tanka series w/2 2-liners) by Roswila

THE STORY LINE

my young boy cousin
proudly shows me the birthday
greeting he's written
for our great-grandmother's
ninety-something-odd celebration

he quickly declares
he printed it all in pencil
so "don't hesitate!"
to offer comments on content
or spot any grammar goofs

it's a missive
I know anyone would be
happy to receive,
anyone but our great-grand,
that is, yet how can I explain

how can I tell him
his affection's not only
unwelcome by her
but repellant, she wants nothing
to do with her descendants

for we're all the fruits
of a husband who turned on her
and though she'd not been
an angel, her behavior
did not warrant rejection

yet she in her turn
rejected each of us for even
less, just for being --
it seems sometimes deep hurt sets
an unreasonable pattern

and so here I am harboring painful knowledge
I choose not to share with this loving young boy

for fear of disbelief? maybe, but more certainly
I don't want to risk this story line continuing


[tanka series capped by two two-liners on a dream of 3-23-15. Photomorph "In the Beginning" (3-3-10 10002d) by Roswila]

BRIEF INTRODUCTION TO DREAMKU (& PHOTOS):

But first, a request: please let me know of any typos or other sorts of blunders in my posts. As my eyes age I'm finding more mistakes are creeping into what I put up here no matter how many times I proof it all. Thanks for any help!

The dream-based poems posted on this blog -- dreamku, tanka, two-liners, monoku, free verse, dream narratives -- are offered in the spirit of collaboration. I have done my part. Now it’s your turn to jump in and see what comes up for you. I.e., there is no right or wrong way to relate to any of these dream offerings. Even my own understandings of them change over time. And it gives me joy when a reader sees something in any of them that I have not. (This all applies to any of the non-dream poems posted here, too.)

Also please note that a dream poem or narrative is not intended as an interpretation of a dream, or even a complete and accurate rendering of one. It is my attempt to get down dream imagery/action that grabs me and, as I write about it, elicits my conscious written association and response. Nor do I believe that one has to remember dreams in order for them to do their work. In my understanding, we are much more than our conscious selves.

You may also note in any further reading on dreamku (the specific forms of dreamku, tanka, two-liners and monoku) you may do here, that in the beginning I stressed "showing, not telling." However, this has been changing for some time. I now tend to "show" (the dream story) and cap if off with a "tell" (some reaction and/or insight I've had to the dream as I was writing about it). This also pretty much applies to my free verse dream poems as well. As to what I have begun calling dream narratives, they are a different animal, probably most akin to prose poems.

For more in-depth exploration of the dreamku forms specifically and one post in which I also address my photo choices:

-- very brief comparison of dreamku and haiku: DREAMKU ARE NOT HAIKU

-- a brief post about both dreamku and my photos THE AREN'TS OF DREAMKU & ACCOMPANYING DIGITAL PHOTOS.

-- detailed three-part post about dreamku: "A DREAMKU PRIMER: Writing Haiku-Like Poems About Your Night Dreams": PART ONE: Introduction & Writing Dreamku as Dream Work; PART TWO: Elements of the Haiku Form Used in Dreamku; and PART THREE: How to Write Dreamku (the second and third parts have some overlap).

-- a short up-dating post about the three-part "A DREAMKU PRIMER" -- Important Up-date to A DREAMKU PRIMER....".

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‘til next time, keep dreaming,







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