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Wednesday, October 15, 2014

SWALLOWING THE SUN (photo) & SOMETHING FRESH (mixed format dream poem) by Roswila


hey, I'm telling you,
it'll be a thoroughly
wasted effort
not to mention depressing
and all too familiar

see? just as I said
those bags of potato chips
are either empty
or stale, and the popcorn packs
on this crowded store rack? the same

while the baked ham slice
your friend's placed on your plate
is tougher than leather
and, to boot, even this dockside
air is a lot more tasty

well, when everything's either empty or stale,
or not worth the effort to swallow
it's time to try something fresh
to walk past the grocery store
to the park on the corner
or dive off the dock for a midnight swim

just make it a brand new move
even if as small as this silver coin
you reach to pick up from among the pebbles
where it sparkles like a rising intuition

[mixed format (3 tanka, followed by free verse) poem on a dream of 10-13-14. I tried making some condensed notes on this but even condensed they went on forever. Suffice it to say, it's one of those jam packed dreams. At the most obvious level it supports something implied in yesterday's dream/poem: the need for new/different action. Which reminds me of that saying I've probably mentioned here many time before: "Insanity is doing the same thing over and over, and expecting different results." Photo "Swallowing the Sun" (10-15-14 024) by Roswila]


But first, a request: please let me know of any typos or other sorts of blunders in my posts. As my eyes age I'm finding more mistakes are creeping into what I put up here no matter how many times I proof it all. Thanks for any help!

The dream-based poems posted on this blog -- dreamku, tanka, two-liners, monoku, free verse, dream narratives -- are offered in the spirit of collaboration. I have done my part. Now it’s your turn to jump in and see what comes up for you. I.e., there is no right or wrong way to relate to any of these dream offerings. Even my own understandings of them change over time. And it gives me joy when a reader sees something in any of them that I have not. (This all applies to any of the non-dream poems posted here, too.)

Also please note that a dream poem or narrative is not intended as an interpretation of a dream, or even a complete and accurate rendering of one. It is my attempt to get down dream imagery/action that grabs me and, as I write about it, elicits my conscious written association and response. Nor do I believe that one has to remember dreams in order for them to do their work. In my understanding, we are much more than our conscious selves.

You may also note in any further reading on dreamku (the specific forms of dreamku, tanka, two-liners and monoku) you may do here, that in the beginning I stressed "showing, not telling." However, this has been changing for some time. I now tend to "show" (the dream story) and cap if off with a "tell" (some reaction and/or insight I've had to the dream as I was writing about it). This also pretty much applies to my free verse dream poems as well. As to what I have begun calling dream narratives, they are a different animal, probably most akin to prose poems.

For more in-depth exploration of the dreamku forms specifically and one post in which I also address my photo choices:

-- very brief comparison of dreamku and haiku: DREAMKU ARE NOT HAIKU

-- a brief post about both dreamku and my photos THE AREN'TS OF DREAMKU & ACCOMPANYING DIGITAL PHOTOS.

-- detailed three-part post about dreamku: "A DREAMKU PRIMER: Writing Haiku-Like Poems About Your Night Dreams": PART ONE: Introduction & Writing Dreamku as Dream Work; PART TWO: Elements of the Haiku Form Used in Dreamku; and PART THREE: How to Write Dreamku (the second and third parts have some overlap).

-- a short up-dating post about the three-part "A DREAMKU PRIMER" -- Important Up-date to A DREAMKU PRIMER....".

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‘til next time, keep dreaming,

If you wish to copy or use any of my writing or poems, please email me for permission (under “View my complete profile”). Roswila's connections & other blogs: Charter Member of the United Haiku and Tanka Society (UHTS); ROSWILA’S TAROT GALLERY & JOURNAL; ROSWILA’S TAIGA TAROT; and TRYING TO HOLD A BOX OF LIGHT.


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