BADGE OF EVOLUTION (photo art) & CUTTING QUESTIONS (free verse dream poem) by Roswila
CUTTING QUESTIONS
did I really slay an entire troop of Boy Scouts?
that slew of do-gooders with their endless badges
and insistence on conforming to the "norm"?
who's good when values vary endlessly?
how's a badge able to assure skill?
what's normal when everything's evolving?
I'll take responsibility only
for having asked these cutting questions
how they received them was up to them
[free verse dream poem on a dream of 9-10-13. This piece is three weeks old. One of those I wasn't all that sure of so kept putting it aside in favor of newer ones. I'm still not all that sure, but I didn't have anything from last night. The only other unposted dream poem I have goes on forever and I'm just not up to editing it right now. So it's finally the Boy Scout's turn to be posted. Yeah, I could skip a day, however, I'm a creature of habit if nothing else. Photo "Badge of Evolution" (2-19-10) by Roswila]
Also please note that a dream poem is not intended as an interpretation of a dream, or even a complete and accurate rendering of one. It is my attempt to get down dream imagery/action that grabs me and, as I write about it, elicits my conscious written association and response. Nor do I believe that one has to remember dreams in order for them to do their work. In my understanding, we are much more than our conscious selves.
You may also note in any further reading on dreamku (the specific forms of dreamku, tanka, two-liners and monoku) you may do here, that in the beginning I stressed "showing, not telling." However, this has been changing for some time now. I now tend to "show" (the dream narrative) and cap if off with a "tell" (some reaction and/or insight I've had to the dream as I was writing about it). This pretty much applies to free verse dream poems as well.
For more in-depth exploration of the dreamku forms specifically (and one post in which I also address my photo choices):
-- very brief comparison of dreamku and haiku: DREAMKU ARE NOT HAIKU
-- a brief post about both dreamku and my photos THE AREN'TS OF DREAMKU & ACCOMPANYING DIGITAL PHOTOS.
-- detailed three-part post about dreamku: "A DREAMKU PRIMER: Writing Haiku-Like Poems About Your Night Dreams": PART ONE: Introduction & Writing Dreamku as Dream Work; PART TWO: Elements of the Haiku Form Used in Dreamku; and PART THREE: How to Write Dreamku (the second and third parts have some overlap).
-- a short up-dating post about the three-part "A DREAMKU PRIMER" -- Important Up-date to A DREAMKU PRIMER....".
If you wish to copy or use any of my writing or poems, please email me for permission (under “View my complete profile”). Roswila's connections & other blogs: Charter Member of the United Haiku and Tanka Society (UHTS); ROSWILA’S TAROT GALLERY & JOURNAL; ROSWILA’S TAIGA TAROT; and TRYING TO HOLD A BOX OF LIGHT.
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