ALICE BLUE GOWN (photo) & IN THE ROUND (dreamku series) by Roswila
IN THE ROUND
we can clearly see
that his heart chakra’s not as
open as the others
this is surprising as he’s
always seemed a caring person
maybe, I say to
reassure his dearest friend,
his other chakras
spin ‘round his tightened heart to
support it ‘till it can open
these words have to squeeze
by a swelling in my throat
unexpected soft sobs
[two tanka and a dreamku on a dream of 8-20-12. Chakra, in Wikipedia. Photo “Alice Blue Gown” by Roswila]
For more in-depth exploration:
-- a brief post about both dreamku and my photos THE AREN'TS OF DREAMKU & ACCOMPANYING DIGITAL PHOTOS.
-- detailed three-part post about dreamku: "A DREAMKU PRIMER: Writing Haiku-Like Poems About Your Night Dreams": PART ONE: Introduction & Writing Dreamku as Dream Work; PART TWO: Elements of the Haiku Form Used in Dreamku; and PART THREE: How to Write Dreamku (the second and third parts have some overlap).
-- a brief up-dating post about the three-part "A DREAMKU PRIMER" -- Important Up-date to A DREAMKU PRIMER....".
If you wish to copy or use any of my writing or poems, please email me for permission (under “View my complete profile”). Roswila's other blogs: ROSWILA’S TAROT GALLERY & JOURNAL; ROSWILA’S TAIGA TAROT; and TRYING TO HOLD A BOX OF LIGHT.
2 Comments:
Fantastic Poem!
Liked the last line as well...Keep Dreaming! Yeah, dare to dream, dare to walk alone, dare to achieve what's best, dare to get what makes difference amongst the rest!
Keep penning always
Good post
Thanks for your comment. If my guess is right, I encourage you also to keep writing. And in any case, of course, to keep dreaming.
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