Roswila's Dream & Poetry Realm

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Saturday, April 21, 2012

WAY SHOWER (photo) & FARE THEE WELL (dreamku) by Roswila


it's neither my job
nor any of my business
but the young mildly
retarded man seems to need help
to find his way back home

down again to the
basement, I say, walk along
the only tunnel,
then turn right once you exit
by the same door you came in

in my mind's eye I
see the exit onto the street
I should warn him it's
up several brick steps to get
out, with a left turn, not right

but he's already
well on his dogged way
I also forgot
to tell him there will always
be others around to ask

I stop guilty thoughts
his blonde hair shines in my mind
as I mouth: fare thee well

[four tanka and a dreamku on a several month's old dream of 12-18-11. Further to my experiences getting used to blogger (this blog's host system) new version, it does seem to move faster. There are issues I'm dealing with but they may be due to my having an old browser (blogger did recommend Google Chrome over my old one when I first began using their new editor). I suppose I could look at it all as a way of keeping my brain young. Or at least of keeping a few of the brain cells I have left alive and kicking. Photo “Way Shower” by Roswila; “Shower” can be pronounced with either a long "o" or to rhyme with "bower," and each meaning applies.]

PLEASE NOTE that I never have nor do I now lay claim to having been the first to suggest writing about our dreams in the haiku form. In fact, the haijin (Haiku Masters of centuries ago) sometimes wrote haiku on dreams. But even more importantly, what I have been developing for several years now on this blog is not even truly haiku or tanka or monoku. The ways in which I have been using and experimenting with these forms makes the results more akin to kissing cousins of these small Eastern poetry forms. Therefore, I mostly use the term "dreamku" to distinguish what I do from those traditional forms. Click here for a more in-depth INTRODUCTION than follows below, including links to my THREE PART PRIMER on the basic (most haiku-like) dreamku form.

Also, the photo accompanying a daily dream poem or non-dream based poem is not necessarily meant to illustrate it, but to reflect some small, even slant aspect of the verse -- similar to Japanese haiga (illustrated haiku). I've also recently realized that although the dreamku (i.e. dream based poems) posted here tend not to have metaphor or simile, the accompanying photos almost always act as such.

To write a metaphor or simile into a dream scenario is something I rarely do. It can be confusing: did it really look like a hand, say, in the dream, or am I just being poetic to make my conscious point? As these dreamku act as a dream journal, my over-riding tendency is to try to stay close to the actual dream scenario itself. Admittedly making for a tendency to less "poetic" dreamku. Then why pay attention to any haiku, tanka, or monoku parameters at all when writing about my dreams? Because I find in even attempting to adhere to them I'm making choices that relieve my dream recall of a great deal of chatter so that I can get down to some important dream aspects. Here's a link to THE AREN'TS OF DREAMKU & ACCOMPANYING PHOTOS in which I go into some of the basic parameters for dreamku and the photos chosen to go with them (and with any non-dream based poems I post here, as well).

The archives in the sidebar hold years of the daily dreamku, tanka, monoku and photo posts I've made, grouped in one post by month. As I no longer post dreamku (or non-dream based poems) strictly daily, each post will appear below and then in the archives by the day on which it was posted.

There are many other sorts of posts here, not all dream-based. I indicate which are about or influenced by dreams. Some non-dream focused posts are book reviews, "regular" poems (some by other writers than myself), scifaiku, writing exercises, Tarot haiku, photos, haiga, and so on. However, most of those are in much older posts. There's a listing by month going back to early 2006 in the sidebar.

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‘til next time, keep dreaming,

[aka: Patricia Kelly]
**** If you wish to copy or use any of my writing or poems, please email me for permission (under “View my complete profile”) **** My other blogs: ROSWILA’S TAROT GALLERY & JOURNAL; ROSWILA’S TAIGA TAROT; and OPENING TO THE LIGHT ****


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