Roswila's Dream & Poetry Realm

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Sunday, November 13, 2011

STEMMING (dreamku) & PHOTO by Roswila


STEMMING

one vine-like green branch
grows fast enough to reach my
palm paused above it,
all the bush stems emerging
from red star-shaped calyxes

the woman and I
enjoy this profusion of stars
a male acquaintance
claims our understanding’s askew
but doesn’t deign to say how

does it matter? this star bearing bush still glows


[two tanka and a dreamku on a dream of 11-10-11. Note on this dreamku: Botanically a flower is cupped by and emerges from a calyx, not a branch. Which may very well have been what the annoying man was thinking. :-D Additional general note: Seems I have enough dreamku to post every day, should I want to. I actually have a backlog now. However, I am finding that without the “pressure” to post every day, not all dreamku “itch” to be posted. Though I’m still glad to have these un-posted ones as part of the on-going dream journal this writing comprises. Photo "Ignition" by Roswila]

PLEASE NOTE that in most browsers you can click on the above image for a larger version. Also, that the photo accompanying a daily dream poem or non-dream based poem is not necessarily meant to illustrate it, but to reflect some small, even slant aspect of the verse -- similar to Japanese haiga (illustrated haiku). I've also recently realized that although the dreamku (i.e. dream based poems) posted here tend not to have metaphor or simile, the accompanying photos almost always act as such. And to write a metaphor or simile into a dream scenario is something I rarely do. It can be confusing: did it really look like a hand, say, in the dream, or am I just being poetic to make my conscious point? As these dreamku act as a dream journal, my over-riding tendency is to try to stay close to the actual dream scenario itself. Admittedly making for a tendency to less "poetic" dreamku. Then why pay attention to any haiku, tanka, or monoku parameters at all when writing about my dreams? Because I find in even attempting to adhere to them I'm making choices that relieve my dream recall of a great deal of chatter so that I can get down to some important dream aspects. Here's a link to THE AREN'TS OF DREAMKU & ACCOMPANYING PHOTOS in which I go into some of the basic parameters for dreamku and the photos chosen to go with them (and with any non-dream based poems I post here, as well).

The archives in the sidebar hold years of the daily dreamku, tanka, monoku and photo posts I've made, grouped in one post by month. As I no longer post dreamku (or non-dream based poems) strictly daily, each post will appear below and then in the archives by the day on which it was posted.

There are many other sorts of posts here, not all dream-based. I indicate which are about or influenced by dreams. Some non-dream focused posts are book reviews, "regular" poems (some by other writers than myself), scifaiku, writing exercises, Tarot haiku, photos, haiga, and so on. However, most of those are in much older posts. There's a listing by month going back to early 2006, at the end of the sidebar.

Click here for a more in-depth INTRODUCTION.

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‘til next time, keep dreaming,






[aka: Patricia Kelly]

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