tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post5006945735262423592..comments2024-01-04T21:53:29.571-08:00Comments on Roswila's Dream & Poetry Realm: LISTENING FOR THE VOICE OF THE CROW (photomorph) & THANKSGIVING DAY 2017 (non-dream free verse poem [revision]) by RoswilaRoswilahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-9222388399269218512017-11-24T10:05:19.190-08:002017-11-24T10:05:19.190-08:00Thanks so much LGD. You might want to re-read it a...Thanks so much LGD. You might want to re-read it as I've made several changes (only in how things were worded, not in what I was trying to say :-D). <br /><br />I never did get any turkey dinner. Sigh. Holiday dinners in our dining room can get really crowded noisy crazy with a longer than usual line to get served, what with guests and an especially good dinner. This old crow can't handle that. So I went and sat on our library balcony that overlooks the pool and watched the crows zipping by as the sun prepared to set. (Didn't go hungry, I have some canned goods in my room and a small microwave...)<br /><br />Hope you had a lovely Thanksgiving with plenty of turkey, "et al."Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-1182335449635244292017-11-24T09:58:52.001-08:002017-11-24T09:58:52.001-08:00[from Roswila: I messed up on posting the revision...[from Roswila: I messed up on posting the revision of the poem this commenter refers to -- none of the revisions would change what he's said, btw -- so I had to copy his comment from the email notification I received of it .. and here it is below]<br /><br />"The way you use belly button as a metaphor is really interesting, and line about the outer world as just so much lint was LOL funny. I also like the entrance of the crows and what you do with them in this piece. <br /><br />LGD"Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.com