tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post3996259615543687394..comments2024-01-04T21:53:29.571-08:00Comments on Roswila's Dream & Poetry Realm: FIVE OF HEARTS (Poems)Roswilahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-42070406236923865032007-03-10T09:14:00.000-08:002007-03-10T09:14:00.000-08:00I really appreciate your thoughtful comments on th...I really appreciate your thoughtful comments on these old poems, oino. Makes the risk I really hesitated to take in posting them worth it. :-)Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-6280290079047007352007-03-09T21:25:00.000-08:002007-03-09T21:25:00.000-08:00WOULD THAT MY HEARTand in the centuries of seconds...WOULD THAT MY HEART<BR/><BR/>and in the centuries of seconds<BR/>between death and rebirth, <BR/><BR/>[I like the sound effect in "centuries of seconds" and your grasp of the concept that even small units of time can loom large if you don't know how long they will last. Can the Phoenix really be sure of rebirth no matter how many times it has happened?]<BR/><BR/>DELAYED REACTION<BR/><BR/>and produces replicas of passion,<BR/><BR/>[How true that no subsequent love is like the first one. How true that sometimes we fool ourselves in thinking we are in love. How true that some are only pretending.]<BR/><BR/>oinoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com