tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post2389894239979244832..comments2024-01-04T21:53:29.571-08:00Comments on Roswila's Dream & Poetry Realm: A DREAM BASED HAIBUN: Response to One Single Impression Prompt of 7/19/08Roswilahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-3046870565936769552008-07-25T12:02:00.000-07:002008-07-25T12:02:00.000-07:00Hi Lisa,Yes, I'd like to know the rest of the stor...Hi Lisa,<BR/><BR/>Yes, I'd like to know the rest of the story myself. Where the haibun ends is where the dream ended. :-) (Actually, that the dream ended as it did gave me the biggest "clue" to what it was "telling" me, by emphasizing the crying.)Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-19372028762996011392008-07-25T10:48:00.000-07:002008-07-25T10:48:00.000-07:00Very interesting. It would be evn more interesitn...Very interesting. It would be evn more interesitng to hear the rest of the story.Lisa at Greenbowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07743973292900758183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-1333371828865816102008-07-23T20:47:00.000-07:002008-07-23T20:47:00.000-07:00Hi Karen Crone,Hope you make it in time for our ne...Hi Karen Crone,<BR/><BR/>Hope you make it in time for our next prompt, an intriguing one "face." :-)<BR/><BR/>I draft my OSI response ahead of time and still sometimes realize Sunday's about over, and a bunch of people have already posted, then I have to rush to post and visit everybody else's. Though I have noticed people post days into a week, as well. I guess what works for each of us is best.Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-3385331190856301172008-07-23T20:26:00.000-07:002008-07-23T20:26:00.000-07:00This is so beautiful. I will keep this one with me...This is so beautiful. I will keep this one with me for weeks.<BR/>Thank you.<BR/><BR/>I didn't wake up in time for the prompt this week, forgot to set the alarm.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-49537363344540774302008-07-23T06:04:00.000-07:002008-07-23T06:04:00.000-07:00Intriguing and honest - dreams are like that.Intriguing and honest - dreams are like that.Quiet Pathshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00758542150832581706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-73237613339487036742008-07-21T20:09:00.000-07:002008-07-21T20:09:00.000-07:00Hi April,Glad you liked the photo. I had a hard t...Hi April,<BR/><BR/>Glad you liked the photo. I had a hard time finding an image to go with this haibun. But I ultimately went with what I've read about images used in haiga: that they frequently are only very indirectly connected to or only vaguely suggestive of the haiku coming at the moment from a very different angle, or maybe only picking up on one small aspect of the accompanying writing.Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-50143279833643996152008-07-21T16:28:00.000-07:002008-07-21T16:28:00.000-07:00Your poem is so poignant, and I enjoyed it very mu...Your poem is so poignant, and I enjoyed it very much. The picture is interesting. Before I read what it was I thought it was a smooth stone. Nice!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-91683869961357663442008-07-21T12:00:00.000-07:002008-07-21T12:00:00.000-07:00This is a really great dream, but not too restful....This is a really great dream, but not too restful. I wish it had gone on longer! Very nice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-34922387164547803792008-07-21T10:36:00.000-07:002008-07-21T10:36:00.000-07:00Amazing how dreams sometimes imitate life! Nicely ...Amazing how dreams sometimes imitate life! Nicely done...Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-52904854930987885222008-07-21T08:24:00.000-07:002008-07-21T08:24:00.000-07:00Strange romantic dream. I'm glad you captured it ...Strange romantic dream. I'm glad you captured it with this lovely poem.<BR/><BR/>ps, I got the url for your mandala but couldn't get in. Darn it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-24762563322447606542008-07-21T03:13:00.000-07:002008-07-21T03:13:00.000-07:00That's so interesting!That's so interesting!indicaspecieshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04082836899942612554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-38707953611147332722008-07-21T01:29:00.000-07:002008-07-21T01:29:00.000-07:00That's really wonderful. The last line turned my i...That's really wonderful. The last line turned my interpretation of everything before it upside down.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-63533351781524644982008-07-20T20:23:00.000-07:002008-07-20T20:23:00.000-07:00..i cannot imagine a more romantic ending..thank u.....i cannot imagine a more romantic ending..thank u for a beautiful poem..Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-40001843486499485432008-07-20T19:20:00.000-07:002008-07-20T19:20:00.000-07:00Hi Edward,Glad you enjoy the mixing of genres, whi...Hi Edward,<BR/><BR/>Glad you enjoy the mixing of genres, which is, BTW, what a haibun is: a prose paragraph capped by a haiku, or sometimes a series of same. :-)Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-4105832765484467102008-07-20T16:49:00.000-07:002008-07-20T16:49:00.000-07:00I liked the way you mixed the genres poetry-excell...I liked the way you mixed the genres poetry-excellent.<BR/>Thank you for sharing.Edward S Gaulthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06415140379858811855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-14558912671141561932008-07-20T14:38:00.000-07:002008-07-20T14:38:00.000-07:00Hi me ann my camera,Good question! And it is exac...Hi me ann my camera,<BR/><BR/>Good question! And it is exactly what I've been watching since I had that dream. Was there something healed by the dream, or maybe some healing represented by the dream? Or was the dream "simply" pointing out the need for *self*-acceptance at a profound level? When wounds run deep, external approvals are barely small echoing drops in a chasm, unfortunately.Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-13403324787738763372008-07-20T14:29:00.000-07:002008-07-20T14:29:00.000-07:00What an interesting dream! It's amazing what our m...What an interesting dream! It's amazing what our mind can put together, from the fragments of everyday thoughts. <BR/><BR/>Thanks so much for visiting MPP!<BR/><BR/>www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.comGeraldine https://www.blogger.com/profile/07410019941984295767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-66006938401193195632008-07-20T13:43:00.000-07:002008-07-20T13:43:00.000-07:00Oh, how many girls self-worth is based upon the ev...Oh, how many girls self-worth is based upon the evaluation of a young man! Profound dreaming!Barbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16660942367303941481noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-29584351109345361492008-07-20T13:34:00.000-07:002008-07-20T13:34:00.000-07:00With the relief at recognition or acceptance; does...With the relief at recognition or acceptance; does the need to change continue or is the acceptance, of change?me ann my camerahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06083671096943783249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-51790554404670165422008-07-20T12:17:00.000-07:002008-07-20T12:17:00.000-07:00I love this! The word images are wonderful, and t...I love this! The word images are wonderful, and the slow build to the surpprise of crying on his shoulder at the end (rather than the expected intimacy)is brilliant. Well dreamt and well written!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-90402713491824071072008-07-20T11:45:00.000-07:002008-07-20T11:45:00.000-07:00Who needs reason and logic in the face of beauty?I...Who needs reason and logic in the face of beauty?<BR/><BR/>I like the way you constructed this.<BR/><BR/>-NicoleRaven's Wing Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08576438868694047958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-10822784909423106262008-07-20T10:46:00.000-07:002008-07-20T10:46:00.000-07:00It carries the feel of a dream - and I love the en...It carries the feel of a dream - and I love the ending.Ravenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04996538460071167819noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-727482254623513822008-07-20T10:32:00.000-07:002008-07-20T10:32:00.000-07:00Wow. Talk about being vulnerable--and struggling w...Wow. Talk about being vulnerable--and struggling with being vulnerable! Whoo.SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-54608268137355905632008-07-20T05:27:00.000-07:002008-07-20T05:27:00.000-07:00Strange story, but dreams are like this, demanding...Strange story, but dreams are like this, demanding no reasons, receiving none.spacedlawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12462723005560128474noreply@blogger.com