tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post1860473908964430933..comments2024-01-04T21:53:29.571-08:00Comments on Roswila's Dream & Poetry Realm: BIRTH OF A GALAXY (photo) & WHY WON'T YOU MOVE ON (non-dream free verse poem) by RoswilaRoswilahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-58763835293100500422017-06-10T13:12:18.083-07:002017-06-10T13:12:18.083-07:00Yeah, me, too, though I saw a shape suggestive of ...Yeah, me, too, though I saw a shape suggestive of both the female form and an aspect of the male, depending on which way I look at it. LOL. BTW, you may have noticed I'm tending to format my poems in this varying line length; all ultimately in one "stanza," with semicolons creating any necessary fuller pauses (or sometimes an exclamation point, question mark, closing quote mark, or elipsis). This odd formatting (odd to my knowledge) emerged on its own. It just felt right and comfortable as it did so, so I've continued to write in it. Go figure the (aging) mind of a (wanna be) poet! Thanks for stopping by, LGD.Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-21477780318944221182017-06-09T18:35:27.609-07:002017-06-09T18:35:27.609-07:00I'm having trouble reading this one, given tha...I'm having trouble reading this one, given that the varying length of the lines leads to a suggestive shape when you look at the poem as a whole :)LGDhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03032022908078797584noreply@blogger.com