tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post115747701678250968..comments2024-01-04T21:53:29.571-08:00Comments on Roswila's Dream & Poetry Realm: SUBWAY MENAGE A TROISRoswilahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-1157568099625369062006-09-06T11:41:00.000-07:002006-09-06T11:41:00.000-07:00Sheila, you do my heart good. At any time, a comm...Sheila, you do my heart good. At any time, a comment like this would be very welcome. But it's even more so with respect to this poem. It's been revised more times than I'd care to admit. And even in this version I was concerned that all but the last stanzas were awkward. However, I'd promised myself this blog was a place to enjoy sharing, not to get all caught up in trying to present "perfect" work. (Good intention, hard practice. :-D)<BR/><BR/>Hope you enjoy any future visits you make here.Roswilahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15669275952943509399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25737357.post-1157557948425601702006-09-06T08:52:00.000-07:002006-09-06T08:52:00.000-07:00I'm only dropping by, as I do whenever there's tim...I'm only dropping by, as I do whenever there's time. But I can't leave today without telling you how SUPERB AND COMPELLING I found this piece re: your observance of the chemistry clash between these two strangers on the subway. Bravo. And thank you for sharing your work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com